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Sixty Seconds with: Rebecca Allred

Ten answers to ten questions in 20 words or fewer. That’s less time than it takes to burn a match*.

(*Depending on the length of the match and your tolerance for burned fingers, obviously)

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Our newest Flash! Friday winner is Rebecca Allred.  Read her winning story here, then take one minute to get to know her better.

1) What about the prompt inspired you to write your winning piece?  I thought that for there to be something new, something else needed to be destroyed.

2) How long have you been writing flash? About 3 months.

3) What do you like about flash? I feel accomplished for finishing a work, and often my flash stories serve as seedlings for larger pieces of fiction.

4) What flash advice would you give other writers? Pay attention to language. You don’t have a lot of words to work with. Make every one count.

5) Who is a writer we should follow, and why? Gordon White. He’s a wonderful writer, and his feedback helped me get my first story (flash!) accepted for publication. 

6) Do you participate in other flash contests, and which? Race The Date and Finish That Thought. Also, I’m starting my own THIS SATURDAY! Y’all should come over and play.

7) What other forms do you write (novels, poetry, articles, etc)? I write short stories and I have a few wannabe novels in various states of disrepair.

8) What is/are your favorite genre(s) to write, and why? Horror – my mind wanders into dark alleys, always asking “what’s the worst that could happen?” I write down the answers.

9) Tell us about a WIP.  I’m working on a short story about a doctor forced to consider the virtues of alternative medicine when fighting disease. 

10) How do you feel about dragons? I love them. Growing up, my friends at school called me The Dragon Woman.

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Flash! Friday # 52 — WINNERS!

OH MY WORD. We’ve made it through a WHOLE YEAR of spectacularly awesome flash fictionning here at FF. Have I told you lately how crazy I am about all of you? Thank you, thank you. And I can’t wait to see y’all tomorrow bright ‘n’ early for the kickoff of the #Flashversary. Don’t forget–Monday at 7:30am Washington, DC time!      

Our final farewell is organically bred by country gal Jaz Draper, who has brought her unique style of wit and love for dialogue to FF. Thank you so much, sweet Jaz, for your awesome contributions this past year! I’ll always be grateful for your time & spirit.    

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Judge Jaz Draper says, So this is my swan song: the last judging assignment for Flash Friday 2013. One year plus a few weeks ago, I walked into the Edinburg library 2 weeks into National Novel Writing Month and met a wonderfully supportive group of writers. No, I did not finish my novel, nor have I had much time to devote to it. But over the year I’ve gotten to read a lot of fun, thought-provoking and creative flash fiction written by our little community. Did I say little? I know Rebekah is thrilled with how our group has grown!

 

Since this is my last assignment and because I’m in a food coma, I asked Rebekah to be easy on me. She obliged by limiting you all to 100 words plus or minus 5. But once again, she selected a spectacular prompt and you, my dear writing friends, did not disappoint.

 

I don’t feel like I have many words of wisdom to offer you except: write. Just write. Whenever you can; wherever you can. I should heed my own advice, I know. Remember to always check your spelling and grammar and syntax, but do it after you get your ideas down. And practice good dialog because dialog brings characters richly to life.

 

Good luck. I’ll be watching…and reading and hopefully doing some of my own writing. Namaste.

 

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BITS ‘N’ PIECES

Jaz says: Each of these phrases reflects the title of the piece in simple summation. Brilliant.

John Cosgrove, Photographic Memories. “Grandpa didn’t hear me. His mind was decades away from here.”

Jacki Donnellan, Strands. “It must be tamed, though achieving this may hurt. And it cannot cling, nor weave itself into tangles.”

LadyhazmatThe Watcher. “Plucked from her bed like a piece of ripe fruit, she’d been peeled and parted, her tender flesh consumed by an insatiable ill on a moonless, winter night.”

Hannah Streett, Losing Meaning. “The letters jump around in their silly little jig, switching partners so often that I lose their meaning.”

Dieter RogiersThe Wager. “As the clock gobbled up the minutes, well past the hour, a sense that all was not well set in.”

Patricia Carroll, Untitled. “If thinking got me here, how do I unthink?”

HONORABLE MENTIONS

Jaz says: Both of these pieces are macabre in their twist on what should be happening in a classroom.

AJ Walker, “The Practical.” The last sentence, “Unfortunately there were no graduates from Robertson’s School for Spies in 1913” brings everything together rather nicely.

Rezzi, “The Smell of Smoke.” Wow. Tough school, this one. I could palpably feel Robert’s panic. Nice, tight writing.

SECOND RUNNER UP

Today’s Chapter, “Cheese.” This piece leaves me asking myself over and over: “Did he take a picture or shoot ‘the one that starts the great war’ with some James Bond-esque camera that’s really a gun? A little time travel, some angst, and a bit of mystery. Well done. 

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James Marshall, “The Adventures of H.G. Wells, Schoolteacher.” I like the unexpected reason the desk was empty. Several writers centered their stories around the empty desk, describing missing people (and the reasons they were missing were very creative). But the invisible student woven into a well-known story was a clever yarn.

And appearing for the second time (just before she begins her judging stint!) as Flash! Friday  

 DRAGON WINNER IS….

ERIN MCCABE!

for “Reservations” 

 Although there were several takes on the Indian School which aptly captured the injustice of the time, I really liked the link between Erin’s title “Reservations” and the reservations the young girl was having about the rigid, uptight white society oppressing her freedom. The phrases ‘gloriously naked’ and ‘running bare-skinned under the warmth of the sun’ and the comparison of her dress to a tipi call to mind delightful visions of the unconditional freedom and oneness with nature that was taken from the Indians in a subtle way. 

Congratulations, Erin! Here is your updated Winner’s Page, a totally awesome but retiring dragon eBadge (below), and your winning Tale. Note: Because of the #Flashversary, there will be no #SixtySeconds interview this week. However, we look forward to getting to know you better as a judge for the first quarter of Year Two!

Reservations

I wanted to strip off my clothes and run into the distance, travelling deep into the unknown, gloriously naked.

“Stop fidgeting!” my sister scolded, as I fought with my pinafore; stiff and unmanageable, it was more akin to a tipi than a dress.

“Cultural Assimilation” they called it, but in truth it was cultural assassination and schooling was a key weapon in their arsenal, aimed squarely at me on a daily basis.

If all “Americanisation” could offer was dusty rooms, starchy frocks and endlessly dull words about dead white presidents, it was little wonder I daydreamed about running bare-skinned under the warmth of the sun.

 

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Flash! Friday # 50 — WINNERS!

THANK YOU, everybody, for coming out to ride along with FF # 50 and fill its virtual trail with such rip-roaring adventures. Reading your tales each week is massively fun (or depressing, of course, depending). Thank you so very much for writing so inspiringly and for encouraging each other so wonderfully.     

This week’s Farewell Symphony in Three Movements is composed, conducted, and performed by Maestra Maggie Duncan, whose passion for elegant and flawlessly executed stories helped further drive our writing toward excellence. We’re so grateful, Maggie, for all the time & effort you’ve donated to this community.  Thank you!    

THE COUNTDOWN SPEEDS UP! Flash! Friday Flashversary Festivities will run Dec 2-6, and Year 2 will officially launch Dec 13 with a brand new judge panel (which is being announced at any moment, I promise).  

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Judge Maggie Duncan says, My last stint as judge of this contest is bittersweet. I’ve read some incredible stories over the past year, but the editor in me has to say I’ve read some clunkers, too. However, the pendulum swings further to the side of incredible than to the other. I’ve loved the fact that I got a review in British English from some of you. My two British grandmothers taught me how to read and write, and then American teachers worked all that lovely British English out of me. It was a pleasure to see it again. There are some amazing writers who participate in Flash! Friday, and many of you leave me breathless and wanting more each week. Thank you for the places where you’ve taken me.

Since this is my swansong, I’ll just revert to the pedantic school marm I used to be. First, a little advice on entering contests, whether large or small, formal or informal—read the guidelines. If a contest says “X words, plus or minus X,” then that’s what it means. I hate disqualifying good stories because they have too few or too many words. Second, don’t pass fan fiction off as your original work in a contest; at best it’s entertaining; at worst it’s a copyright infringement. I could go on, but finally, invest in a copy of the Chicago Manual of Style. In the U.S. the overwhelming majority of markets for your fiction writing, whether contests or for publication, want to see your work conform to that standard. From the CMS you’ll learn that in the U.S. we love the Oxford comma (it’s one of my personal faves), and you’ll learn exactly how to format those titles I’m fond of, e.g., titles don’t need quotes around them (unless you refer to them in a body of work, as I do below), punctuation counts in them, too, and they require initial caps. And one more thing—proofread, then proofread, and then proofread. I know this is a twenty-four hour contest and that some submit at the last second, but proofread.

Oh, and this really is the last thing, I promise. Please, for the love of all that is holy and sacred, learn not to use a comma splice and learn the difference between its and it’s—unless you like making me weep.

And I exit, stage right, with some words from the Bard’s Hamlet, Act 1, Scene 5:

 “Unhouseled, disappointed, unaneled.

“No reckoning made, but sent to my account

“With all my imperfections on my head.

“Oh, horrible, oh, horrible, most horrible!

“… Adieu, adieu, adieu. Remember me.”

 

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EXTRA ACCOLADES

Best title, hands down: “Not All Things Lost (Wish to Be Found)” by Joidianne4evaThis is a case where the title is a perfect match to the story.

Best opening line: “The children were gone, but the children were not gone.” From “Tormented,” by Lady Hazmat. This was a textbook example of foreshadowing.

Best closing line: “Death may ride a pale horse, but life rides a palomino.” From “Beyond the Pale,” by MT Decker. I laughed long and hard at this great comedic ending.

Best story premise: Horses on Mars in “Coming Home” by Jay Korza. This was a fanciful yet totally believable story with a killer penultimate line.

HONORABLE MENTIONS

There are a lot of HMs this week because the stories were good but just had some minor shortcomings.

Marie McKay, “Unwanted.” This was a chilling, desolate story of a mother keeping a brave face while devastated by what she has to do to save her children. Very gripping and tense.

Gordon B. White, “Long in the Tooth, or Manifestly Mandibular Destiny.” This story was a delightful romp with a lot of action. You’ll never think the same way about a dental appointment ever again after reading this.

Jay Korza, “Coming Home.” One of the best sci-fi stories I’ve read in all the times I’ve judged this competition. It’s a wonderful, appealing premise—I wanted to know so much more.

Maven Alysse, “Wind Swept Sands.” This story had a wonderfully haunting cadence to it. It was a nice use of language to evoke mood.

VB Holmes, “The Adventure Ends: October 3, 1880.” This is a tragic tale beautifully told and which appeals both to our sense of adventure and our love for our siblings.

RUNNERS UP

The same holds true for the Runners Up as for the Honorable Mentions—great stories, which were just edged out by the winner.

(4th RU) Lady Hazmat, “Tormented.” This is a harrowing alternate vision of the Pied Piper, which is horrifying in a way that will give you chills and will haunt your dreams. Thanks a lot!

(3rd RU) Joidianne4eva, “Not All Things Lost (Wish to Be Found).” If you have children or grandchildren, you won’t look at them the same way after you read this delightfully creepy story. And if those children happen to say, “Food,” run. Just run.

(2nd RU) Jessica West, “Always Changing, Always the Same.” As unrequited love stories go, this is touching and unique. You get a complex, wonderful character hoping to surprise his love, only to have that surprise turned on him. You feel sad for him, but you also realize he’s ultimately on the right path.

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Allison K. Garcia, “Antes de que Caiga La Noche” (Before Nightfall). You’re never exactly sure what the protagonist is fleeing, but this story makes you feel the dread and fear as if you can see it. This magical realism tale shows how you should never lose your faith, but if you do and regain it, the spirits can be very forgiving and obliging.

And appearing for the second time as Flash! Friday  

 DRAGON WINNER IS….

MARGARET LOCKE!

for “The Wanderer” 

 The premise of immortality being bestowed on a mere human has been done many times, masterfully in Star Trek’s “Requiem for Methuselah” and the Twilight Zone’s “Escape Clause” and “Long Live Walter Jameson.” This week’s winning story ranks right up there with them. This is an immortal who understands exactly why he was cursed with immortality and knows he needs to stay away from people so he won’t experience an eternity of hurt, but he just can’t help himself. The staccato cadence of the sentence fragments only emphasize the protagonist’s pain; they’re like the jabs of a knife, getting the point home that no matter where he wanders, he’s doomed to suffer the consequences of his earlier, thoughtless actions. Well-developed and well-written.

Congratulations, Margaret! Here is your updated Winner’s Page, a would-you-please-stay-put-for-one-lousy-second dragon eBadge (below), and your winning Tale. Watch your inbox for your next Wednesday’s Sixty Seconds interview questions.

The Wanderer

The sadness settles across my shoulders like an old, familiar coat. Like a yoke around my neck. Like the cross I have to bear.

I bring destruction wherever I go. It’s followed me through millenia, since the dawn of time.

Atlantis. Pompeii. The Great Fire of London. The Titanic. The list goes on and on.

I thought this time was different. It’d been twenty years. Twenty years of peace in this tiny village, so remote, so removed from the rest of the world. I thought maybe, just maybe, she had forgotten, had forgiven. Maybe, just maybe, I’d atoned for my sins.

I’d risked it; I’d settled down, had a family. Now they, too, lie beneath the sand that had enveloped them in a flash, like so many before them.

This was my fault. Mine.

I’ve tried to hate. Tried to ice myself out. Tried to live alone. But the drive has always been stronger, the hunger beyond my control.

She made sure of that, on that mountain top an eternity ago. It was the price I had to pay for taking her, for seducing her, for rejecting her.

“You will sow only pain, reap only sorrow. You will pray for death. It will not come for you.”

This is my curse; to seek love knowing I can never have it. To find love knowing I can never keep it. All the while knowing whoever gets close…

I can’t voice it, can’t warn them. Can’t control it. I cannot stop the liquid words from pouring out of my mouth, cannot control the intoxicating magic emanating from my eyes. They’re like moths to the flame.

I am a magnet, attracting those I should repel and repelling those I should attract.

Bring me the monsters, the murderers, the depraved, the wicked. Not these innocents, time after time.

I am The Wanderer. I get around. But this is nothing like the Dion song.

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