Flash! Friday # 29 — WINNERS!

I KNEW IT! You all wrung tears and giggles and who knows what else out of poor Mona Lisa and her weighty travails. Thanks to all of you for giving the prompt a go, and history-sized thanks to judge Beth Peterson for her own weighty travails. I love the weeks when y’all make the judges sweat over their decision. Oh wait. That’s every week!


Judge Beth Peterson says, This was a great group of stories, and I really enjoyed the privilege of reading and studying each one! Thank you, writers all! Many of you made me think, many of you made me smile, several made me laugh or sigh in sheer enjoyment, and some of you made me smirk. Tar and feathers on the Master’s stool, indeed! EEP! 

NOW: a bit of a disclaimer, if you will. I am an artist. I am an artist who loves history and art history. I am the daughter of an artist and art professor who has actually seen the Mona Lisa in person, not once, but twice! So this week’s prompt has a great deal of added pleasure for me. *happiness dance* 



Craig Anderson, “Revealed.” Fun–you get the clear indication of the husband’s character as well as the lady’s, and having been caught in doing commission work, I sincerely feel for the painter! But you really got me with that last line: “And paint that stupid smirk off her face!” ROFL 

Marycritic13, “Lady of Ice.” A fun and well-done piece of fantasy! I love that you used the Mona Lisa’s background as part of your story–it is so often overlooked and yet so wonderfully painted. I am also totally intrigued with how and why Lady Liada’s eyes turned from brown to icy blue! (And I’m sure Rebekah will love that you have dragons, lol.) [[Editor’s note: ARE YOU A MINDREADER?!]] 

Kevin S. Julien, “Beauty is a Beast.” Kudos for that delightfully unexpected ending! You made me laugh with undiluted mischievousness! And a nice — if irreverent 😉 — nod to the pedestal the painting has been metaphorically placed upon, as well as all those Mona Lisa parodies, and including the ones with fangs. 😀


Ruth Long, “The Lady’s Secret.” Homey and inviting — a real treat to read and a love way to bring this larger-than-life icon down to the earthly realm we humans actually dwell within! I love the immediate sense of place and the characterizations. My one wish was that you had stayed true to the time frame… perhaps using the Italian for “grandma” and “ducky,” and using something other than pinky-swearing. Wonderful story otherwise.


Mary Decker, “A Secret Worth Keeping.” Magical, and reminiscent of so many myths and legends of artists/craftsmen and their works, from Pygmalion to Gepetto and onwards. Good beginning stretching into a lovely, strong climax-of-intent, followed by a very strong ending! The characters of painter and his lady are spare but come across so clearly – and I love the answer you gave for her secret smile.

And our Flash! Friday third-time gold medalist, but it’s-been-a-while



for “Eterno Sorriso.”  What can I say?? Masterful writing and a great merging of history, literature, and… not really a twist, because it fits so very well! And you certainly caught daVinci’s reputation for grouchy arrogance, LOL! Not just with the American tourist, but with the docent as well. Marvelous story — congratulations!

Congratulations, Maggie! Here are your Winner’s Page, your magnificently crafted eBadge (below), and your winning Tale. Please contact me asap (here) with your email address so I can interview you for Wednesday’s Sixty Seconds feature.

Eterno Sorriso

“And here we have possibly the most famous work in the Louvre, Da Vinci’s portrait of whom we believe is Lisa Gherardini, wife of the Florentine merchant, Francesco el Giocondo,” said the museum docent.

Under the careful eye of the guard, the tourists gathered around the portrait, held back by its protective enclosure.

“You probably know it as the ‘Mona Lisa,’ but we call it ‘La Gioconda,’” the docent continued.

“Is that the picture that was in that Da Vinci code movie?” asked one man. The guard looked him over. An American, of course.

“That was ‘The Last Supper,’” the docent replied, her smile indulgent.

“Can we see that?” the tourist asked.

No, you moron, the guard thought, because it’s in Milan.

The docent moved the group along, and the guard met the eyes of Lisa Gherardini. If only they knew, he heard her say inside his head. His smile echoed hers.

The real Da Vinci code was his formula for immortality, and who better to guard his masterpiece but Il Maestro himself?



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